What you typed was actually very reasonable. But, think about this, suppose you composed a catchier post title? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your website, but suppose you added something to maybe get people's attention? I mean Making way for Pokemon onesies in your closet is a little plain. You could peek at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create post titles to grab viewers to click. You might add a video or a related picture or two to grab readers interested about everything've written. Just my opinion, it could bring your website a little bit more interesting.